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Moonlight on hot skin:
Elusive lover's passion.
I watch in shadow.
Elusive lover's passion.
I watch in shadow.
I'd comment on this one, except the comment would soon be longer than the actual haiku itself, kinda like explaining a joke. If I had to explain it, it would lose its impact.
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It's amazing what so few words can convey, when the experience is common to both writer and reader. I like how you don't fart around with something delicate. You go for the throat emotionally.
Also, on first reading I saw:
Moonlight on hot skin:
Elusive lover's pattern.
I watch the shadows.
Different, but not hitting as hard.
Well done Russ. I take it you needed a break from the book you've been writing.
BTW. Not a morel in sight here, but last night I dreamed that you were showing me your haul, and you has a few that must have been close to two feet tall. hahaha
Also, on first reading I saw:
Moonlight on hot skin:
Elusive lover's pattern.
I watch the shadows.
Different, but not hitting as hard.
Well done Russ. I take it you needed a break from the book you've been writing.
BTW. Not a morel in sight here, but last night I dreamed that you were showing me your haul, and you has a few that must have been close to two feet tall. hahaha