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Regret: Aphrodite

"Regret!? And why should I regret my gift?
My love and beauty all desire - all!"
Then prettily the goddess puffed and sniffed,
"I'm seafoam-sired: immortal! Not a doll!

And yet you'd trap me with your chain and ball.
This marriage set by Zeus: a dusty joke:
and now you'd wrap me in your net? The gall!
The gall! The gall! I'm weary of your smoke,

the endless fumes of forge and iron and coke,
your wounded eyes that only wish to serve!
Then serve me now! My passions have awoke."
She gasped as coarsened hands explored each curve.

Then gasped again as Aphrodite came,
and fleeting thought, "I wish he wasn't lame!"

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The form is of course, a Spenserian sonnet, which interleaves the rhyme scheme of lines from one stanza to the next.
©2006-2009 *themapper
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Submitted: February 13, 2006
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I really have a far-away friend to thank for the inspiration for this. Her interest in Greco-Roman Astronomy and Mythology got me digging around for material on the ancient Greek gods and goddesses. And then I caught her posting on 100 words on regret, which effectively presented 100 words exactly on regret, but in sonnet form!

Well, after that, I could not resist beginning a new sonnet cycle. This one will be my "Regret: ___ " series, beginning with a well-known triangle, the goddess Aphrodite, her husband the god Hephaestus, often known as Lame Vulcan, and the god of war, Ares, who Aphrodite has an affair with. Hephaestus finds out, and traps them in a net from his own forge, a net that is unbreakable. Each character in this series will have something to regret. Here's the first one.
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............. Your thinly veiled sex scene there made me blush. Just so you know.

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I'm mad. You're mad. We're all mad here...
:) Lovely. Glad you blushed, wish I could have been there to see it in person.

And I actually didn't intend on making it thinly veiled. I was after storyline supported by sex, without dwelling overmuch on the physical details.

:D Thanks for taking time to read it. I hope to have another one ready for the series soon.

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My pond aerator is bubbling as it should.
oO Why do people find it amusing to make other people blush? It''s interesting......

Hehehe... and the physical details aren't overly dwelt upon, but I'm in a delicate frame of mind lately and wasn't expecting a sex scene. XD

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I'm mad. You're mad. We're all mad here...
I like how you have captured the duplicity of her thoughts vs. her actions. Women! Who can figure them? Who can resist them?

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~ Ben :frog:
Duplicity - ambiguity - inner conflict ... perhaps she represents a spectrum of thoughts and actions of one who feels both excited/enthralled by her lame husband, and simultaneously repulsed by him.

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Oh I quite loved this, my passion for mythology has come back around recently in a new fevor, and I've been thinkign about drawing a peice concerning Mr. H and Miss A here. I think you captured the fact that their reletionship is very complex, and multifacted, though most only assume it to be about adultry with Aries and such...Excellent Job!

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When you wake, you shall have cake, and all the pretty little horses.
:) Thanks for the :+fav:
Well, I look forward to seeing your drawing about the lives of the two. Thanks for your kind words and please let me know when you've got a picture for us.

Russ

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mmm, well, this one is my personal favourite of the three. thank you so much for stopping by. May I rummage around your works?

russ

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My pond aerator is bubbling as it should.

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