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Sonnet for Endless Flight by *themapper:iconthemapper:



At thirty seven thousand feet we cruise,
a "Vigne Elisa" settling jangled nerves.
A menu! Look! But nothing much to choose.
I ask. An aisle goddess gently serves.

A steady stream towards the rear await
their turn to genuflect, then to their seat
return, a little fresher. "Are we late?",
I hear at thirty seven thousand feet,

and wonder, if we are, what might be done?
I ache. I shift my legs and back and butt.
The afternoon gives way to evening sun.
The menu item grumbles in my gut.

Another glass of red would be so sweet.
I rest, at thirty seven thousand feet.
©2007-2008 *themapper
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I wrote this on one of those long, long flights across the continent. The "Vigne Elisa" is a brand of red wine, inoffensive but, on a long trip, welcome for its ability to soothe.

I have no recollection of an in-flight movie, though it's likely there was one. Can't have interested me enough to pay attention to it.
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~dolor-sit-amet:icondolor-sit-amet: Oct 26, 2007, 12:26:00 AM
I normally dislike sonnet form, but you did well with this one. And it's certainly a topic I'm familiar with.

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Hanlon's Razor: "Never attribute to malice what can be better explained by stupidity"
*ironhenry:iconironhenry: Oct 26, 2007, 5:42:19 AM
I'm impatient and annoyed just reading this. Well made!

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~ Ben :frog:

A creative man is motivated by the desire to achieve, not by the desire to beat others. ~ Ayn Rand

Killing time murders opportunities.

Picasso once said: 'Inspiration exists; but it has to find you working.'
~wyldhoney:iconwyldhoney: Oct 26, 2007, 12:32:36 PM
"Aisle goddess"... :)

I've never been on a plane, yet I can somehow feel the entire experience.

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Needed time to clear my mind, breathe the free air find some peace there I used to keep my heart in jail but the choice was love or fear of pain and I chose love cos everything is energy and energy is you and me (Anathema)
*themapper:iconthemapper: Oct 26, 2007, 6:46:22 PM
:) Well, it did help while away some of that 'imprisoned time' sitting in that small seat. Thanks for stopping by and for the :+fav: - may I ask why you normally dislike the sonnet form? I quite like it, myself.

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Entre chien et loup.
*themapper:iconthemapper: Oct 26, 2007, 6:46:58 PM
O good. You caught the mood of it then. Thanks!

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Entre chien et loup.
*themapper:iconthemapper: Oct 26, 2007, 7:00:23 PM
:D And my flight attendant certainly was an aisle goddess. I just wisehd she came back my way more often.

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Entre chien et loup.
~dolor-sit-amet:icondolor-sit-amet: Oct 26, 2007, 7:13:06 PM
I just find it carries too many associations and expectations, and not ones I like. It's hard for me to get the flow right, and it always feels a little cerebral.

I guess it's mostly prejudice, I associate sonnets with stiff educational institutions, free verse with angry college students, and villanelles with pure emotion. There's little or no basis for that, of course, but it still colors my perceptions.

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Hanlon's Razor: "Never attribute to malice what can be better explained by stupidity"
*themapper:iconthemapper: Oct 27, 2007, 4:00:03 PM
One of my most favourite forms is the Rondeau (e.g., In Flanders Fields). But I must also admit, I have come to rather like the sonnet. One of my first challenges at an online sonnet club was to write a joke in the form of a sonnet. I chose, "why did the chicken cross the road?" I kinda like how it turned out: [link] .

Do you write regularly?

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Entre chien et loup.
~dolor-sit-amet:icondolor-sit-amet: Oct 28, 2007, 1:06:51 AM
Fairly regularly, though I'm not much of a fan of forcing it. But I am doing NaNoWriMo this year.

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Hanlon's Razor: "Never attribute to malice what can be better explained by stupidity"